RESUME MISTAKES
Stop Losing Pen Test Jobs to Bad Resumes
Identify and fix the critical mistakes that keep hiring managers from seeing your hacking expertise.
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Common Mistakes That Kill Your Chances
Each mistake includes why it hurts, how to fix it, and before/after examples
Missing Security Clearance SectionHIGH
Why it hurts
- Employers often require clearance info for sensitive projects
- Omitting it signals lack of eligibility for classified work
- ATS may filter out candidates without explicit clearance tags
How to fix
- Add a dedicated line under Professional Summary stating your clearance level
- Use exact terminology (e.g., "Active Secret Clearance")
- Include clearance expiration date if applicable
❌ Before
John Doe – Penetration Tester
✓ After
John Doe – Penetration Tester (Active Secret Clearance, expires 12/2026)
ATS Tip
Insert the phrase "Security Clearance" and the specific level to match recruiter keywords
Detection Rules
regex:/clearance/i
keyword:Secret
keyword:Top Secret
Resumly Tip
Never hide clearance; place it prominently near your name or summary.
Overusing Jargon Without ContextMEDIUM
Why it hurts
- Hiring managers may not understand obscure acronyms
- ATS can misinterpret or ignore unknown terms
- Reduces readability for non‑technical recruiters
How to fix
- Spell out acronyms on first use (e.g., "Advanced Persistent Threat (APT)")
- Pair jargon with measurable outcomes
- Limit buzzwords to a maximum of three per bullet
❌ Before
Performed APT simulations using C2, XOR, and DLL injection.
✓ After
Conducted Advanced Persistent Threat (APT) simulations using command‑and‑control (C2) techniques, XOR obfuscation, and DLL injection, resulting in a 30% increase in detection coverage.
ATS Tip
Include both the full term and abbreviation to capture keyword variations
Detection Rules
regex:/\b[A-Z]{2,}\b/
keyword:APT
Resumly Tip
Always define acronyms; it helps both humans and bots.
Listing Tools Without Demonstrating ImpactHIGH
Why it hurts
- Shows possession of tools but not skill proficiency
- ATS looks for action verbs and results, not just tool names
- Recruiters discard generic tool lists as fluff
How to fix
- Combine each tool with a quantifiable achievement
- Use action verbs (e.g., "identified", "exploited")
- Prioritize tools most relevant to the target role
❌ Before
Tools: Metasploit, Burp Suite, Nmap, Wireshark.
✓ After
Leveraged Metasploit to develop 5 custom exploits, used Burp Suite to uncover 12 critical web vulnerabilities, and employed Nmap and Wireshark to map network topology, reducing attack surface by 25%.
ATS Tip
Embed tool names within achievement statements to satisfy keyword parsers
Detection Rules
regex:/Tools:/
keyword:Metasploit
keyword:Burp Suite
Resumly Tip
Turn tool lists into story-driven bullet points that show results.
Unclear Employment DatesMEDIUM
Why it hurts
- Gaps raise questions about continuity
- ATS may misorder experiences, affecting relevance ranking
- Hiring managers can’t verify tenure length
How to fix
- Use consistent "MMM YYYY – MMM YYYY" format
- If a role is ongoing, write "Present" for the end date
- Align dates left‑justified for easy scanning
❌ Before
XYZ Security – Pen Tester (2019 – 2022)
✓ After
XYZ Security – Penetration Tester Jan 2019 – Present
ATS Tip
Standard date format improves parsing accuracy across ATS platforms
Detection Rules
regex:/\d{4}\s*-\s*\d{4}|Present/
Resumly Tip
Consistent dates eliminate ambiguity and help ATS rank recent experience higher.
Generic Objective StatementLOW
Why it hurts
- Fails to differentiate you from other candidates
- ATS often ignores objective sections in favor of summary
- Recruiters skip reading vague goals
How to fix
- Replace objective with a concise Professional Summary
- Highlight 2‑3 core strengths and target role
- Include key certifications or clearance if relevant
❌ Before
Objective: Seeking a challenging position in cybersecurity.
✓ After
Professional Summary: Certified OSCP penetration tester with 5+ years of experience uncovering critical vulnerabilities for Fortune 500 firms. Proven track record in red‑team engagements, exploit development, and maintaining an active Secret clearance.
ATS Tip
Lead with keywords like "penetration tester", "OSCP", "red team" to match job descriptions
Detection Rules
regex:/Objective:/i
Resumly Tip
Swap the objective for a results‑focused summary that packs keywords and achievements.
Formatting Guidelines
File Types: PDF, DOCX
Sections: Contact Information, Professional Summary, Technical Skills, Professional Experience, Education, Certifications
Naming: FirstName_LastName_PenTest.pdf
Consistency
Length: 1-2 pages
Date Format: MMM YYYY
Location Format: City, State (Remote optional)
Resume Quality Checklist
- Include active security clearance if you have one
- Spell out acronyms on first use
- Pair every tool with a measurable result
- Use consistent date format (e.g., Jan 2020 – Present)
- Replace generic objective with a keyword‑rich summary
- Limit resume to two pages maximum
- Save as PDF with a clear file name
ATS Alignment Guide
Common ATS Systems: Taleo, iCIMS, Greenhouse, Lever
Keyword Strategy: penetration testing, vulnerability assessment, exploit development, red team, OSCP, CEH, OWASP, CVE, Metasploit, Burp Suite, Nmap, Python, C++
Heading Format: Use standard headings like Professional Summary, Technical Skills, Experience, Education
Quick Fix Workshop
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- Standardize dates to MMM YYYY
- Add quantifiable results to each bullet
- Replace vague terms with specific tools and techniques
- Insert security clearance line if applicable
- Convert objective into a professional summary
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